Rough Draft of my Newpaper Layout

Here are my second two rough drafts of my two pages of my newspaper. I have changed the layout of my front page slightly by moving the masthead down so there was space along the top of this page to put offers inside the newspaper, one being a chance to "Win a holiday" and the other being houses for sale within the area.

Adverts for my Newspaper Publication

In the creation of our newspaper publications, we are required to design and make our own adverts for these pages. I chose to do adverts advertising the following things: a local photographer, a Marina boat trip company, a local hair and beauty salon and a local PR company. I felt it was important to advertise companies that would appeal to my target demographic, and have enough to appeal to both genders.

Pictured below are each of my own adverts and an explanation as to why I chose to use the images I did, and the adverts I took inspiration from in order to create my own outcomes. 

Local PR Company

Here on the left is the advertisement I focused on when looking for ideas and features to use on my own design for a local PR company. The white background is effective on this advert because it keeps it simple and allows the text to be easily read. On this particular advert I think using the orange colour scheme is useful in order to allow the association to seem vibrant and interesting, and attract people to research further into what it is this association can offer them personally. I took my inspiration for the layout of my own PR company's advert from this ad, and positioned my lines of colour in similar widths at the top and bottom of the ad to frame the information effectively. 

Pictured here on the right is my own advert I have created for an online PR association. I used a very similar style of ad in that I decided to use bands of colour framing it to make it have an overall professional look. However I used a pale shade of pink for my own work as I felt it looked modern and would still attract people's attention without being too bright. For my own design, I also used small icons of the Facebook, Twitter and commonly recognised telephone sign as this is a common feature I have noticed on many newspaper or even magazine adverts in the past. I wanted to keep my PR advert plain and simple in order to abide by the terms of the expected professional print advertisement, and I was pleased with the result.

Local Photography Advert

Here is the existing advert for photographer Mike Clarke's photography company "Planet Photon". I chose this advert to base my own outcome on because I liked the bright contrasting colours used in this image, and thought it would give a modern feel to my newspaper. I took features of this advert with my own creation but tried to exaggerate them for example having thicker black outlines around the text on my advert for "Galactic Imagery". 

This is the advert I created for a local photography company, based on an existing advert for Planet Photon. When capturing the right image for this advert, I was focusing on creating the effect of movement through colour in my photography. I selected this particular image because I liked the blue highlights over the male figure, as it acted as almost a shadow-like effect and I felt was eye catching and interesting enough to come across as an example of a photography company's work. For my choice of text I decided to use white lettering as I felt it stood out over the predominantly dark background of the image, and to make these letters clearer to read I gave them a black outline. The font itself was chosen because it gave the ad a more art-like feel as the black speckles on the letters reminded me of paint splats. 











Local Car Specialist Advert

Here is the car specialist advert I used to base my own newspaper advert on. I chose to focus on this one out of the examples I found because I thought there was a good amount of text featured on the ad to give their target demographic the right amount of information, without cramming too much text in one small space. I also thought the use of a photograph of a nice car would be a good feature to use when creating my own newspaper advert because it allows people to instantly recognise what is being advertised before reading any text. 

Pictured on the right is my own car specialist advert, which I created mainly using Photoshop. To begin with, when creating this advert, I took photographs of some cars trying to get the right amount of light in order not to get shadows appearing on the cars, to make my end photograph as effective as possible in making whichever car I chose to look attractive. Then on Photoshop, I cut out around the outline of the car in order to give me allowance to place the car on a plain white background, so the text would be easily read and not lost on the background of the carpark it was parked in. For the bullet points of text on this advert I used the font Arial Black as out of the fonts I tried out this one was the easiest to read when I zoomed out, and I felt this was extremely important if the ad was to be appearing small on my newspaper page. The small pink box in the bottom left hand corner of my advert is an effect I used to look like a sticker or post-it-note as this feature was used on the Dents8 ad, however in that case was a circle, not square. Overall I was pleased with the car specialist advert I created however if I were to create it again I would include some grey shadowing behind the photograph of the car in a more similar style to Dents8.

Existing Advertisement Analysis

In order to give me the inspiration I need to create my own newspaper adverts I have chosen to analyse some existing adverts to give me some ideas as to how they are designed and what the layouts consist of. 

I have focused on colours, use of text, chosen images/photographs, style of font, and general impression given off from the advert itself. 

I have analysed 3 different adverts of each genre of the adverts I will be creating:

Adverts for Photographers

Here is one example of an advert used by a professional photography company, "Dirk van der Werff Professional Wedding Photography". It has used a dark, black background which gives the advert a dramatic effect and could suggest to their target audience that they aim to take impressive, breathtaking photographs. On this advert in particular, the company has chosen to show several different examples of their photography, 14 in total, in order to entice people and illustrate a range of the styles they are capable of. On my own advert for a local photographer, I am going to have one single photograph as my background in contrast to this layout. I will layer my text over this image like I have shown in my blogpost on my own photographs. The font used at the top of this page is in a sort of handwriting style, written in white lettering. The colour white could have been used to connote purity, which is often related with the idea of a perfect wedding and the bride's clean white wedding dress, which for wedding photography is obviously very relevant. 

Here is another example of an advertisement for a photography company. This advert has also used a dark background and again this could be used to symbolise dramatic, interesting forms of photography that the company aims to produce. However, in contrast to the advert I analysed first, this design does not include any photograph taken by the company. This is an interesting choice of design for an advert for a photography company and could be interpreted as an informed decision to keep an air of mystery about the type of photos the customer could expect. The design and layout of this ad is very simplistic, using only 3 colours of dark grey (almost black), white and yellow. The simple outline of a cliff edge could have been made yellow to suggest bright and positive photography that the company produces. This could entice people to research and find what they may expect from a company like this. In my own design for my photography advert, I have completely gone against this sort of ad as I believe it is more effective to show a good example of the sort of images you produce in order to attract people to that particular company. I also think my use of a bright image as the background will look attractive on my newspaper page and catch the reader's eye effectively. 

This is an example of a photographer's advert which differs from the two above that I have analysed, as it does not use dark colours as the background. This ad appears more bright and family orientated than the two ads pictured above as there are light colours used of beige and light, grey-ish shade of blue. These colours could be seen as quite plain day-to-day colours which could illustrate an idea of normal family life and pictures to reflect this designed to  appeal to families. Two images are used on this advert in particular, which is most similar to mine out of the three compared to one using no images at all to one using a total of 14. By using two images it can attract the reader's eye and showcase the photographer's skills without the images being lost amongst a wide range of images that the audience may not pay as much attention to individually.

Adverts for Small Businesses

(My own ad will be for a local PR company, but I have focused on small businesses in my research that use writing in their ads)

This is an advert for a small accounting company called Inglis. I have used this as an example in my research because the advert uses mainly text which is something I'll be looking to replicate in my own work. However, I don't think this advert is as effective as it could be, because there is not a clear enough colour scheme, which I believe is crucial if there is not going to be an image to attract the reader's attention. When designing my own advert for a small PR agency, I will use the same sort of amount of text however I will have my text centered, and more symmetrical.

I prefer the style of this advert compared with the one pictured above because there is a more clear colour scheme of purple. Purple is a good choice of colour for an advert such as this, as it it not gender exclusive, so the tutoring could apply to anyone. It is also a colour connoted with passion and wealth which could give the impression to people that maths tutition could lead them to success. The image matches the theme of the advert well, as it's a man in a suit which is a proffessional, businesslike image that suits the theme of education. I may take elements of this design in my own advert for a local PR company, for example the telephone, message and facebook icons towards the bottom left of the ad. Another aspect I think is effective in an ad such as this is the name of the person and service of the company is put in large lettering; in fact the largest lettering on the page, which helps make it clear what the advert is advertising.

Here is an advert for an insurance company named belmont international, which uses a clear colour scheme of dark pink and green. This advert has rougly the same amount of text as the other two adverts, but I don't think this one is an effective as the others. This is because I don't believe the information is laid out clearly enough to allow the reader to know exactly where to look. I think having the information in clear lines to seperate it out makes it easier and clearer. There are also no images again on this advert, which may well be a feature I use on my own advert because this seems to be somewhat conventional for adverts for small businesses such as these.

Adverts for Boat Trips 

Here is an advert for a company who specialises in boat trips called Sea Searcher. I like the layout of this advert and the fact that they have created it in a long horizontal box as a photograph of the boat is used for the background. However, I think they could have used a much more high quality image for the background of this advert. The text is also not made to stand out as much as it perhaps should be. By making the text white in a plain, sans serif type font it makes it too plain, especially as the sea behind the image appears light in colour due to the reflection of the pale white sky.

This is advertising Beans Boat Trips, and has used a more effective image for the backgroud I think, compared with the ad pictured above. Bright orange,bold lettering is used for the masthead to capture the reader's eye and make it clear what is being advertised. The phone number is also in this colour, making it easy for the reader to know how to get in contact. This ad also uses three other photographs as well as the one used for the background. These allow people to see other aspects of the boat trip, and can further entice them to come enjoy the experience and make the offer seem more appealing. For an advert such as this I think just the correct amount of text has been used to let the reader know the information they require, without giving away too much.

Fred Olsen cruises is a worldwide firm, as it clearly states on the advert itself but I chose to analyse it despite this, as I think the main image used is very effective to attract an audience. The more dramatic effect differs to both the other adverts I have previously analysed as it does not picture the boat in question, but the view to be seen or perhaps the experience to be had on such a boat trip. However I do not believe the colour of the blue band for text at the top of the advert is neccessarily in keeping with the image, as the colours do not abide by the same colour scheme. However blue is a colour that connotes bright blue skies, sunshine and the ocean, so I can be understood why such a colour would be used. Three pictures are placed along the bottom of the advert, all picturing the cruise ship itself which advertises the scale of the impressive boat and it looking it's best to further excite people by the prospect of a grand scale cruise ship.

Adverts for Car Specialists

This car advert for a company called Kars Automotive Specialists uses only black and white for it's main colours in the colour scheme. This is not a feature I wish to replecate in my own advert creation as I don't think it will effectively attract people's attention on a newspaper page which will already have a lot of black and white on it. I do however think this advert is effective in the amount of text used in the form of bullet points on the right hand side of the ad. By clearly listing what the company offers, the reader can immediately recognise whether they require the services of the company, saving time for the company and potential customers.

Here is an another car specialist advert named Crofton Auto Service. This advert also lacks colour, which is an element I won't choose to feature in my own work. On this ad, the black and white seems to go with a old-fashioned theme they have chosen to create this ad in the style of. In between the words "Auto" and "Service" the company's logo is situated, with a cartoon man fixing a car. It is effective in letting people know what the advert is advertising but in my opinion is too detailed for a car specialist logo. On my own ad, I will have an actual photograph of a car, with a light coloured background and text layered over it.

Out of the three car specialist adverts, I think this one would be most effective in a newspaper because it has some colour on it, which could make it stand out amongst the text on the page. By using the colour red, it connotes ideas of power and speed which is relates well to cars and repairs in order to keep them that way. This advert is the most similar to the design I had in mind for my own advert creation, as there is a small photograph of a car which I plan to have on my own advert. It also has a similar amount of text to the conventional type of car specialist ad, which I will be abiding by.

Adverts for Hair & Beauty Salons

This is an advert for a hair and beauty salon called "KCUK Hair & Beauty Day Spa", which uses bright, feminine colours in order to connote an idea of beauty and the types of services the company (spa in this case) provides. There is a lot of text on this particular advert, which I don't believe is appropriate for a newspaper ad, as it needs to be short and to the point so the reader quickly has a chance to gather all the information necessary. The photograph is very small on this advert, and not very clear. In my own work, I am planning on featuring a photograph of a girl with her hair and make up done, with the text either layered over the top of this image most likely created on Photoshop, or positioned next to the female image. 

This advert for "16th Ave Hair Salon" uses royal blue for the main colour of their colour scheme, which could be seen as unconventional because pink is seen as a more traditionally feminine colour. Therefore this advert goes against the expected type of hair and beauty salon advertisement  which could connote individuality and cutting edge style. The contact information and company title are in larger letters which I think is a helpful feature to make it simple and easy to contact them. Bullet points are another feature I may well take into my own advert designs because they are a short way to get as much information across as easily as possible. 

This advertisement is the most similar to the design I had planned for my own hair and beauty advert. By having the text and image clearly set apart, the reader can find out what they need to know and does not detract the attention from the high quality image of the result of the hair and beauty salon's work. The colour scheme is violet and white, with grey faded background behind the female image. Violet is a dramatic shade, which connotes pleasure and indulgence, two key elements of many of the services offered in a hair and beauty salon. This is definitely the most effective hair and beauty salon advert in my opinion that I have analysed, due to the layout, choice of image and colour scheme. I will aim to base many aspects of my own advert on this design. However I may include bullet points to space out my information, and have the contact information and company name in larger letters to make them stand out properly.

Newspaper Logos

In the planning and research for my own newspaper publication, I realised I have not yet made very much focus on newspaper logos and whether one will be included in my own work.

After doing some more of my own research, I have found that many current newspapers include their own logos and this allows these papers to be easily recognised and stand out amongst other leading publications. 

On my own newspaper, I plan on including a small logo of a seagull as my logo. I have decided this is appropriate for my paper as the area it is aimed at has it's own marina, (Portishead Marina) and Portishead is situated near the sea. 

Here are some examples of pictures I found online of animations of seagulls in order to give me some inspiration:

Here is one example of an animation of a seagull, but this one features some colour which is most likely not an element I want my own newspaper logo to have. If this image had the colour retracted including the grey area then it would be a much more plan outline and because it's merely a seagull in a standing position, I do not think this is an effective enough newspaper logo. I prefer the idea of using a seagull flying for my logo, rather than just standing still as it's too plain and I want my newspaper logo to suggest freedom of speech and encourage people to read it. 

This is another example of an animation of a seagull, which in a more simplified version could be perhaps more suited and appropriate to be used as a newspaper logo, however I don't think this image would be as effective in a simpler form. For my own logo that I will create, I plan on having my logo all in one colour, instead of like in this example where the legs and beak of the seagull are featured orange. Another issue with designing a newspaper logo in a similar style to this one would be that this image is wider than the other ones I have looked at. This large width used mainly for the wings of the birds could be seen as wasting space and I'd rather feature a more compact design for my logo, that can fit easily around/near my masthead.

Pictured above is another flying animation of a seagull, however I found this image more interesting as is includes a background of the sea and sky. However I think this kind of design is too detailed for the simple kind of logo I am aiming to design and create on my own newspaper. However in my own logo design I may take elements of this without the sea and sky background.

Newspaper Content - Articles

Main Front Page Article -

"Fury at Local Burglary"

Many local residents have been left feeling panicked and distraught after the Portishead Mirage building was broken into last weekend. Three different appartments had their doors badly damaged and locks broken off as the culprit made their way into the homes. So far the items recorded to have been stolen are some very valuable belongings including one iPad, two laptops, and several other expensive appliances. One of the residents from these appartments came to us to explain her distress, "I have always felt so safe living where I live and this incident has made me doubt even my closest neighbours. The sooner this criminal is put behind bars, the better for everyone in our community.".
Improved security is said to be being placed at the entrances to the building but one man claims the damage has already been done. Most of the items that were stolen are said to have been insured, but it's the uncertainty of knowing the criminal is still out there that will haunt these residents insists one local resident. "I cannot put into words how devestating it is, knowing you cannot feel safe in your own home. I have lived here with my young daughter for five years now and never have I felt so worried for her or myself." 



Second Page Articles - 

"See No Evil, See Stunning Art!"

Artists from all over the world came together recently to form a truly magical display of art on Nelson Street in Bristol. One local young man Daniel Gordon was lucky enough to be able to take part in this memorable event by painting his artwork on one of the grand scale buildings involved in the project! He and the other artists aimed to create an outdoor gallery of world standard pieces of art, put forward to inspire and excite the community of Bristol. It represents hundreds of elements of the designs and styles in the street art world and thousands of people came together to celebrate this phenomenon. We asked Daniel how it felt to take part, "I've never felt so proud and honoured to express myself through my street art as I did taking part in this project."

"Turnaround Triumph! Local Hockey Team Goes for Gold!"

After training for many months, the Local Hockey Team have been thrilled to announce that they have qualified for the National Hockey Championships! The 18-25s gathered together recently to celebrate their achievements so far! The team captain Marsha Byrne explains, "We have worked so extremely hard for this, and I am so proud to hopefully strive to lead our team to victory! The girls and I have formed such strong friendships through our training together and now is the time to push harder than ever before."

"Olympic Pride Spreads Through the Nation!"

A true sense of unity has been spread through the community recently as people have come together to celebrate the outcome of The Olympics! There have been barbecues, fun runs, street parties and more all over Portishead to show our support for the athletes of Britain! We spoke to one local Pub Owner who claims "These last few weeks have been wonderful. It was just what we needed as a community; something to bring us all together in fun!" There have been reports of some local sports days and events being hosted in further celebration of the Olympics, and news will be released at a later date.

"Facebook Friends? Facebook Foes for One Local Girl"

Almost all young people these days will be proud owners of their own Facebook accounts, and most of the time we can recognise this as good, modern online friendship profiles. However this was not the case for one local girl, Jennifer Phillips. Bullies have targeted her for a number of months and have been making her life hell, writing explicit, hurtful comments on Jennifer's photos, status updates and much more. Jennifer's form tutor came forward and reported, "Jen hasn't appeared in school for weeks. The teachers and her friends have been getting extremely worried about her, this needs to stop before it's a comment too far." The bullies have been suspended from school and meetings with their parents have been arranged. Hopefully this will be the end of the misery this local girl has had to face. 

Newspaper Photographs

Here I have chosen to blog some of the photographs that I will be using for my main front page image, my advert images, and some article stories too. 

Advertisement Photographs -

Here is the photo I plan on using for one of my front page adverts, "Marina Boat Trips". I have chosen to include the marina obviously, and have tried to include enough white/light space in the photograph so that layering dark coloured text over the picture won't be an issue. Still allowing people to read it easily. 

This is the photograph I am planning on using for my advertisement for a local photographer. I plan on having white text layered over this image, with details of the photographer including email address and phone number. I have based the inspiration for this advert on an existing photography company named "Planet Photon". Here is the image used for their advert, and where my inspiration for my own image came from:

Mock up of second page layout - Made on Powerpoint

Here is a mock up I created of the second page of my newspaper to give me a basis for when I start creating my final product. 

There will be two adverts on this page, the larger of the two being for a local photographer. For this advert I plan on having a high quality photograph supposedly taken by this photographer with their information layered over this picture. My other advertisement will be for a local PR company, based on an advert along the lines of this one:

The main article lines on this page will read "See No Evil, See Stunning Art!", and my article will be positioned in the section below my main image. This article will be aiming to persuade people to go and witness the amazing graffiti exhibition for themselves!

At the bottom of my page will be another article, this time about a local girl being bullied over Facebook. The headlines for this article being "Facebook Friends? Facebook Foes for One Local Girl". My image positioned next to this article will be an over the shoulder shot of someone sitting on a computer/laptop with the Facebook homepage up. I thought this would be a more sufficient choice of photograph in comparison to an image of the local girl in question, as the article covers a sensitive topic and a real local newspaper would not want to single out this girl in her time of distress. 

Either side of my main image of the See No Evil artwork will be my other two articles, "Turnaround Triumph! Local Hockey Team Goes for Gold" and "Olympic Pride Spreads Through the Nation". Both of these articles won't have images.